If ONLY it were progressed differently
This is a fantastic song and a fantastic remix and I'm currently in love with it.
I feel you went into it too fast. This song would be AMAZING as progressive trance. There are also some flow issues for me. Parts just all of a sudden come in out of nowhere. And it ends so abruptly.
But I have to say, the beginning is just so beautiful. The song is so beautiful. I just wish there was more to it.
you are right but I think that makes the song unique =D
I started to make music about a year ago and I still have to learn many things
thank you =)
I really liked the beginning until the drums came in. In my opinion, they were just too harsh for the song, or at least at that point in the song. And when that loop comes back, it's also too loud.
I would consider this song semi-progressive. As for the builds, if your looking to make this song epic, I kind of suspect it would need to be in a different key. Also, in order for the builds to be epic, the stuff in which it's building to must be epic. Your version is a version best left soft.
But that's just my personal opinion. Good mix either way.
really? i liked the drums. haha but o well everyones got their own opinion. :) thanks for the criticism..seriously :) -757irish
I loved this piece for sure. Excellent work.
I agree that the lead should have be a decrescendo rather than a sudden drop. It kind of interrupted the flow for me. And I also think the bass is just a smidgen to pronounced, but that is just personal preference. All and all fantastic song.
Thank you very very VERY much! I understand your views but like you said, they are just for personal preference. but thank you so much, again! Realy glad you liked the song!
I want to use this in a song. I will post it here when it's done haha. If I ever get started
Wasn't too fond
Until it got to 1:04. Really nice. Could use a better ending though. And more drum work maybe. But well done again.
I liked that one as well
It seems like you are into the music share of this genre like me man. The snare was a little harsh in my opinion but it wasn't enough to ruin it for me. Just a mastering issue.
That's some tight shit man. I was jammin for sure. I wouldn't give up on it myself haha
Made me smile
Well done, you made me smile :)
I absolutely loved this. It may just be my favorite song in all of NG at the moment. Piano + Trance = Mad Win
Mad respect man.
Sounds a lot like my earlier stuff. The reviewer before me is right too. You'd be surprised how much better you will get with pretty much every song you do. Keep at it and try something new with every song and you'll be great in no time. But then again, I've been at it for like 2 years and I'm still just mediocre haha. Good luck to ya
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